Friday, August 9, 2013

Back From St. Louis And Back To My Desk

This writer officially feels accomplished as she has finally completed her summer project!
But we have some bad news too.
On upside, I've finished a novel. I've edited said novel. I've reread this said novel.
Then I, being the perfectionist that I am, thought this was not good enough. I had to make it awesome, I had to make it beautiful and brilliant before it ever reached the light of day.
I have to rewrite it, yet again.

This time, rewriting will take a very different form. What was originally about 70,000 words of a first person narrative will now become third person because I briefly wondered if the story would flow better that way. I rewrote the first chapter in third person and found that it was fantastic.

…Shit.

So I now have no choice but to rewrite my entire story, as otherwise I couldn't live with myself if I subjected the world to it the way it is now.

Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Lore Movie Review



Today I’m doing a movie review! I am currently writing from the wonderful city of St. Louis, and in bed because there is no desk.

Today's Movie: Lore

 Language: German 

Two days ago I watched the German Australian film Lore directed by Cate Shortland. It tells the story of Lore, the eldest of five siblings trying to go over the river and through the woods to grandmother’s house. However it’s not a simple little fairy tale in their case, but a horrifying nightmare. The setting is postwar Germany as Hitler and his closest associates have committed suicide in their bunker, as Germany is being separated into zones by the allied powers, and the Jewish are at last being liberated.

Lore’s parents were active members of the Nazi party, and were both captured at the beginning of the film. This leaves Lore the task of getting her siblings though the black forest to Hamburg, where their Omi or Grandmother lives. If anyone has ever gone on a multiple day hike trip, they can sort of get the feeling except for people randomly firing their weapons into their woods, looters, and people wanting your baby brother because they can get on trains easier that way.
Along the way, they meet a survivor named Thomas. He fascinates me mainly because of his fascination with Lore and her siblings. At first he follows along and helps them out occasionally, but becomes a member of their group. Lore is uncomfortable around him because he is Jewish, but he has the papers that she lacks for being able to move across borders. Thomas fascinates me, but he also freaks me the hell out. He’s basically a predator, sexually attracted to fourteen year old Lore, who is good at keeping away all the other freaky predators around in postwar Germany.
Thomas wasn't the sort of guy I'd talk to on the street, but he was such a cool character that I still don't have quite figured out.
Lore makes use of shaky cam, which I usually hate, but does it in a way that adds to the atmosphere rather than makes you unable to see action. It makes you feel like you should be alert and wary like the characters and reminds you as the viewer that while a little girl is skipping rope, no one is really safe. It was a strange sort of coming of age story, about children, especially the eldest Lore, being forced to grow up way too quickly. It confuses you, and makes you root for the people who are so easily the bad ones with a shift of perspective. 


The movie left me feeling unsatisfied and unfulfilled, and I had to cheer myself up by watching Amelie afterwards.

Pros: Beautiful shots of the Black Forest, excellent acting, compelling characters.
Cons: ...it's depressing.


Conclusion: Don’t watch if you are depressed or do not wish to be mildly depressed, but it’s an excellent film for trying to emphasize with people who lived through WWII and it can expand your understanding of the forties past watching Pearl Harbor.

Saturday, August 3, 2013

Bridal Mask Review

I fell like reviewing a Korean Drama today!
Bridal Mask is rather hard to describe without giving away a bunch of spoilers. Therefore I will try to keep this review as spoiler free as possible, which may make it a bit difficult to explain the plot.

First off, I will explain the setting a bit;

The drama takes place in 1930 when the whole of Korea was occupied by the Japanese as they were trying to expand their eastern empire. To give the oversimplified version of why this occurred, the Japanese wanted resources and wanted to become an imperialistic country much like Great Britain or France. War and politics are completely messed up and complicated, and when it comes down to it, it’s hard to choose sides. Bridal Mask looks at the side of the Koreans who have suddenly lost their leader and their kingdom (it was the Joseon Kingdom, and had been around for centuries) and were expected to integrate into the Great Japanese Empire. This included learning Japanese and changing names to more Japanese sounding names.

So basically, the Koreans were pretty pissed. It’s still a rather sore subject to bring up and there is quite a bit of arguing about the Japanese use of Korean women (as well as women of other nationalities including Japanese) as comfort women (aka Prostitutes) in an attempt to reduce the number of Chinese brothels soldiers used and keep up morale (didn’t work).

Bridal Mask tells the fictional tale of a mysterious person who wears white robes and a Gaksital which translates to Bridal mask from which he gets his name. He performs acts of justice is the eyes of the Koreans and is a pain in the ass terrorist to the Japanese. Lee Kang To, a pro-Japanese but actually Korean Imperial Police officer conflicted between surviving and doing what he knows is right, becomes obsessed with tracking down Bridal Mask, up until certain events lead him to take the mask himself.

I must say, this series is fabulous to look at. There’s over the top martial arts, period costumes, and good shots of the mountains. The plot is simply amazing and it even had some twists a seasoned viewer like myself certainly didn’t see coming.

My complaints are simply limited to my own personal preferences. I would have preferred Bridal Mask wear black to better contrast with the white the Imperial Police were so fond of. Personally, I’m a person who hates war, blood, and violence, and I’m always the first to look for a peaceful way to get information; peaceful meaning not beating the shit out of them. I haattteeeddd the torture scenes, they were so brilliantly done.

This drama was intense. There were torture scenes so gruesome that they were hard to watch (and I watch surgeries for fun) and I felt as if nearly every character was about to go completely insane and go on a murderous rampage. No one is completely safe from committing immoral acts, or jumping off that slippery slope and becoming about as logical as clothes on a Pomeranian during the summer. I had to take a break and watch some gold old fashioned Ouran High School Host Club before I could will myself to continue.

Depending on the pacing, you might like that intense, constantly moving the plot forward but for me, I felt a bit like I was riding a train towards a canyon without a bridge. I loved it, and I loved the characters, and I loved it when they slowed down a little, and I loved the intrigue and the plot twists, but I never forgot that Korea didn’t get their independence until 1945 when the Japanese surrendered to the Allied Powers in World War II. That meant that for roughly fourteen or fifteen years after the series, the Koreans still had to deal with name changing, comfort women recruitment, censorship, and being unable to govern their own nation. It put a damper on the victories of Bridal Mask for me.


Rating: Hot Coffee (tastes good but don’t bolt it all at once)


Best Parts: The acting is simply wonderful, the characters are very easy to relate to and even the villains get their fair share of characterization. The number of action oriented females surprised me, as did the number of women who got okay characterization outside of the love interest.
Parts I could do without: The torture scenes and the number of times people resorted to violence turned my stomach, but I understand that there was a reason to it. My only real complaint was that it was painful to get me to like so many characters and then watch their world turn increasingly to shit.

I say check it out, if it’s not your cup of tea, you’re better off not sticking around. If still interested, I suggest checking out the Manhwa by Huh Young Man.

Friday, July 26, 2013

My Day So Far!

It would be incredibly sweet if one of the five or so pageviews I received on the last post would leave a comment to declare wholeheartedly that I am not alone….

                Anyway, self-pity fest being entirely over, I come to you now, live from my desk (unless of course you read this after I—well forget it) with today’s sleepy summer news! It’s a bit wet out here, and I’ve been writing, well what I call writing. To anyone else, it might be a great number of things other than writing such as:
1.       Trying to make my hair look like Arwen from Lord of the Rings!
2.       Working on a summer essay for class because we still have those.
3.       Eating!
4.       Websurfing
5.       Rearranging room
6.       Watching anime
7.       More eating
8.       Reading quotes from the Bard
9.       Putting my Koran and my Bible next to each other just to feel contrary
10.   Even more eating!
11.   What’s this? You’re actually writing during designated writing time? Congrats!


And so on and so forth. I’m thinking about letting an English teacher tear my most recent novel to shreds and then giving it to a friend as part of the target audience who  I know is lying because she crinkles her nose. In a month, I will be able to gain all the free and extremely painful constructive criticism I could ever possibly desire.  Now if only professional eyebrow waxing could be free and then I’d be entirely set for life!